Viralou Marie E Zafico
Chris Alexander
ENA101
Five Senses
1) A white silly pigeon in Bryant Park was so hungry. The white pigeon ate in the grass field with his/her fellow pigeons until he/she turned to the ground which is the spot of the tables and chairs and surrounded by few office dress people in Bryant park and then, when the pigeon seen a white plastic bag with an orange peel he/she stepped his/her feet left and right fast to go at the white plastic bag. The white pigeon arrived 3 inches near in the white plastic bag he/she looked around and struck his beak on the plastic bag many times as he/she wanted to destroy the plastic bag.Meanwhile he/she slowly dragged the bag backwardly using his beak near in the grass field Unfortunately, the cleaner of the park seen it and the guy ran to chase the white silly pigeon and other pigeons flew away.
2)An old sixty plus woman sat on the wet chair at Bryant Park. All chairs, tables and ground are wet and the old woman felt it and she goes up right away from her seat and touches her whole butt and looked at her chair and around and she sit on her chair again. The old woman took a book and glasses from her green bag that seated on her lap. the old woman started to wear her eye glass and quick open her book and hold it with both hands and took her right thumb finger and licked it and pressed it and slid to turn the next page until she stop turning the pages and she realized it was up side down.
3) The American couple in Bryant Park really cared each other. The American couple were both drank their coffee. A white long golden red headed girl took a sip in her coffee and take out her tongue and waves her five left fingers in front of her tongue so her blonde white boyfriend quickly grabbed down her hand and faced her girlfriend and gave a blow on her girlfriends tongue. The white blonde guy eats his sandwich loaded with full creamy mayonnaise and took a bite in the middle of the sandwich so the mayonnaise spilled over his upper lips and her girlfriend grabbed her napkins on her hand and wipe out the mayonnaise on his upper lip so the guy smiled and kisses her girlfriend on the forehead.
I like your use of he/she for the pigeon story. It reminds me of the anxious movement a pigeon makes as I read it. I don't like pigeons so I refer to them as it. I loved the last one as well, but I wish you wouldn't tell us at the beginning that they care a lot about each other since at the end of your piece you show it so beautifully!
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